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Grape Hyacinth
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An older shot of a grape hyacinth that I recently processed.
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LucasVN
Oct 9, 2009, 10:13:59 AM
There is a lot I like about this photo.
First, you took it up so close and so zoomed in, that it revealed the intricacy of the flower structure.
The color is good, with the calming blue; however, the green on some of the younger flowers detracts a little.
I also like how the nearer flowers are focused, and the farther ones are out of focus.
In addition, the way the stem & leaves are out of focus helps draw attention to the flowers, which are the focal point of the picture.
One suggestion would be to crop blank edges, like the one on the left.
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jayshree
Oct 24, 2009
Good focus.
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Vamaena
Oct 25, 2009
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Thank-you so much!
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sheikhrouf23
Oct 9, 2009
beautiful
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Oct 10, 2009
my pleasure!
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First, you took it up so close and so zoomed in, that it revealed the intricacy of the flower structure.
The color is good, with the calming blue; however, the green on some of the younger flowers detracts a little.
I also like how the nearer flowers are focused, and the farther ones are out of focus.
In addition, the way the stem & leaves are out of focus helps draw attention to the flowers, which are the focal point of the picture.
One suggestion would be to crop blank edges, like the one on the left.
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